"You find yourself in a vast temple filled with terrifying carvings."
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Decent, deserves to be expanded upon. The art remembers me of Ancient Indian temples, the martyred aspect has a Christian vibe.
Our Lady of Endless Suffering, I think this is fantastic, and very easily misunderstood.
Some countries might ban it.
I think this a perfect jump for a religion. I am also impressed that you added bit of mystery in even such a sparse post. We get one impression, then another and then a 3rd all in 100 words. Well done.
Very nice idea! Quite believable and, as axlerowes pointed out, we get everything we need to know in 100 words.
Very nice, and slightly 'deeper' than it seems at first. Great example of the power of a few words! After reading the second sentence I'm hooked and my 'sense-of-wonder gland' tingles.
perfict,fills me w/ ideas,will prob steal for new campaign 5/5
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